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Thursday, November 5, 2020

showdown in the night

                    showdown in the night

                                                                                            part  2.   showdown 


Claire was getting scared she longed to have a normal life like all they  other children in the wold. Just then she heard a crackling noise, Claire walked closer and closer then pop  out comes Lucy, Lucy is Claire´s bff that stands for best friends for ever. Bang  the shadow comes back Lucy screams Claire cry's. The end of chapter 2 .

 



                                                                                                                
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  1. AnonymousNovember 8, 2020 at 4:44 PM

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  2. AnonymousNovember 8, 2020 at 5:03 PM

    Hi Ava,
    You have used some great adjectives and it is full of suspense in this chapter of your scary story.
    Mrs Roach

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  3. AnonymousNovember 11, 2020 at 12:20 PM

    Dear Ava showdown in the night 2 is cool I can't what to see want show down in the nigh 3 is like from Miriam

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