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Friday, September 4, 2020

showdown in the night

                                                              part 1. showdown in the night


one rainy day a little girl called Claire was wondering  the hall in the orphanage she kept hearing noises  like a little girl laughing Claire was only four but as she got older the  noises got louder then one night she saw it a shadow following her she ran and ran but the shadow kept following her she called but it was hopeless  her mum had talked about this but Claire was never so sure that it was true

  

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 8, 2020 at 4:40 PM

    Hi Ava,
    Wow this story is scary. I like all the scary words you have thought of. I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
    Mrs Roach

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